Juan Said:

Is Sarah Palin a good choice?

We Answered:

McCain has "locked in" the polar bear vote...
Seriously, a bad choice. An obvious gimmick. If any Hillary supporter considers voting McCain beacuse of her presence on the ticket they will, in my beloved grandmothers words, be "biting off their nose to spite their face". The only thing they have in common is that second "X" chromosone".

Susan Said:

I'm trying to remember all the Republican sex scandals of 2009. Any missing?

We Answered:

You forgot US Senator David Vitter of Louisiana with his hooker bust.

Yvonne Said:

Please make this paragraph better!?

We Answered:

Just glancing over this, you have a lot of comma splices (commas where they shouldn't be) and split infinitives (you should never put anything between 'to' and the verb, so you'd say 'to walk quickly' and not 'to quickly walk'. You should change 'the hacker's motive was to simply find...' to 'the hacker's motive was simply to find...' You also do NOT need commas around Sarah Palin in the sentence: Republican Vice President Candidate Sarah Palin has recently experienced an issue with a hacker breaking into her yahoo email account.
Take out the comma in "Due to the hacker knowing personal information about Palin..." Don't capitalize Zip code. ADD a comma in "...able to change her password, getting access..." 'To anonymously access' is a split infinitive again. Change that. Don't use profanity, even in quotes. Edit it, and make sure the formatting is EXACTLY as you found the quote, unless you're edting stuff out of it , in which case you use the ellipses, like you have. Otherwise do not use them. Change 'identify the hacker turningout to be a 20 year old..." to "identify the hacker, who turned out to be..."
There's a lot of semantic stuff in this that I'd like to change, but it's my preference and your paper. Those are the most shocking grammatical errors. Hope it helps.

Lonnie Said:

Do Satanic Sex Perverts & Criminals Rule America?

We Answered:

OK.And the dimocraps are the party of infanticide.You mentioned what,10 or fifteen examples?And I mentioned millions.You lose.

I'm just trying to be sensationalistic,but the above statements are true.
I am too lazy to type up all the things I found.Or ,really,I prefer to say I'm too smart to type it up,since someone else has already done it for me.See below link.

Eric Said:

Please read this paragraph and tell me how i can improve it?

We Answered:

For one thing, it is much more than one paragraph. The quoted material should be a full paragraph on its own. Try to organize the rest of it into a logical progression from introduction to conclusion. You have not really identified the point you are trying to make. Is it that she was careless? That she blended personal and official business on a single account to avoid the possibility of having anything subpoenaed later on? That we should all be more careful? That only immature Democrats do stupid things? That parents should be held responsible for their grown children's illegal acts (this is implied since you mention the name of the father but not the son who was the perp)? That we should all be aware that our actions have consequences? Or what?