Hugh Said:

Are these good Birthday gifts?

We Answered:

Lol, very good. x

Marion Said:

Help my moms driving me crazy <.<?

We Answered:

Eh I'm sorry about your situation , really I am : / I know how you feel because sometimes my Mom can be annoying like that, so you don't have any friends you can move in with? how about your family like grandma or grandpa or other aunts or uncles? Its almost christmas time so maybe you can ask your family for money then or if you want to get the hell out now ask for a early present and tell them about your situation. or maybe they can talk some sense into your mom : / also tell your sister that it would be nice if she talked to your mom about how she treats you, because maybe your mom doesn't realize, also tell your sis you need your space in your room also and to try to keep it somewhat clean. also apply for jobs like crazy.. like every weekend and pray for the best : / Hope i helped somehow, good luck! <3
Also tell your mom even though you live with her you are 19 so if she can not treat you like a baby it would be nice. maybe shes really not signing the papers not to be a physco but because she doesn't want you to move out and will miss you? just talk / confront her about it.

Danny Said:

Feedback on Chapter 1 of my story please?

We Answered:

It's very well put together, very descriptive. You set the overall scene very nicely. It's easy to feel something for Hunter right away. The only real quibble I have with it is the punctuation. You may want to go back over, and re-check it. There are a few places where you've used commas in the wrong place, and it kind of upsets the flow. My only suggestion as far as content - if Willows Rock is an island, you might want to refer to it as being off the coast of Maine rather than in Maine. That's a very minor thing, though. When is the next installment?