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Tamara Said:
Can anyone tell me the KILT 100.3/Houston - Steve's IPods - Rewind & Trivia for July 2, 2009?We Answered:
July 2, 2009 KILT 100.3 Houston, Tx.Have a Great Day Ya'll
10 I Pod: Fast cars and Freedom
1 I Pod:
Rewind: Dashes
Sleuth: Flag ( also for friday )
Cha: C
Cmt: B
Gam: Red
Hel: B
His: B
Whe: C
Vid: Kenny Beck ( Morning )
You made us jealous yesterday getting to see Martina up close and personal, but so glad you got to do it. Is the tea party today or friday?
Maybe We can schedule that in. Glad you are off on a Loooooong weekend.
May Everyone Be Blessed For this Holiday Week End.
LOL...........ME
Regina Said:
what do you think of my vision of a heavenly home Note all of it may not show so it might seem cut off?We Answered:
When you reach the state of heaven/Nirvana what ever you choose to call the peace that everyone will attain eventually, you will realize that these materials will mean nothing. Materials feed the ego, which will be long gone by the time you reach your heavenly destination. Fame is for the vain people, when you reach heaven, you will have learned that materials and fame and your royalty will only bring unhappiness, and such things are what lead to suffering on earth.If this heavenly scene makes you happy, why do you care what we think? It doesn't please me. But to each his own.
Albert Said:
I have here the conclusion to a story I have written. It obviously needs some touching up, but...?We Answered:
Honesty number 1:It's annoying to read big chunks of text.Are you trying to go with the Faulkner approach?
'After I smoked my cigarette I sat upon my mother’s old 1950s stoop and pondered the backwardness of the earth’s yearning for “settling down”—why would you settle down when there are highways great arteries of the Mid West!—cowboys sittin’ in their saddles slouching chewing rutty tobacco and spitting to whistle through loose canines at the broad Mrs. Harbringer as she bends over to scoop up the daily mail from last morning’s mailboy circuit—it’s a shame they don’t deliver milk anymore—anywho, Mrs. Harbringer, the men whistle from high above their arrogant horse heads at the swingin’ *** of the woman as it swings brightly and excitedly back into the saloon—that image can quickly go to rot, as any mad bad mind can tell you'
That is one sentence. That is a run on, and it should not be one sentence. What time frame are you working in? The references you make, and the drawl of the narrator don't seem to match. It's like you've thrown an early 1800s country bumpkin into the late 1900s. It's just odd.
I'm sorry, but I don't care for it.